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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
Why do I get the feeling that Moth is like a ghost? She not only has made friends with the two ghosts (as you mentioned in the first chapter), but she has such an elusive nature that is very "ghostly". It's interesting how you have all Harry's conversations with her entirely written in italics - it added a sort of surealism, yet also made them stand out from the rest of the narrative. I loved the scene with the birds - it had quite the wonderful imagery in it, picturing the bird sketches in the small room. This is a beautifullly put together story. I really enjoyed reading it. =)

Author's Response: Haha, no, no, she's not a ghost. That would be entirely too M. Night Shyamalan of me. :) I'm glad you liked the scene with the birds; it was one of my favorite to write. (Aside from the scene in the girls' loo! Yay Myrtle!) Thanks so much for the reviews. <3 arienette.

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