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Review:Hiduras says:
This was very good! You didn't make a choise telling what side he is on and will be an in the end... it was in character and that is important... I could just hear Snape arguing eith him self like that... I don't understand why you mixed Trelawny into it though.. I don't know why it just seemed a bit half harted... was i´t because you wanted to etablish the fact that he was the one who heard her in the Hogs Head? oh and one gramma thing: "For either side to fail would mean countess and unnecessary deaths..." shouldn't it be countless instead of countess?? I am glad I got a chance to read this!

Author's Response: [mistake fixed!] The second half was written about five months after the first, which I suppose would make it sound different, and there's the fact that for the second part, I was trying to follow HBP as closely as I could. Thanks for reviewing this, Heidi, I really enjoy hearing your thoughts on stories. =)

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