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Review:Sophia Montgomery says:
How simply ironic. 'He hoped to see her again'. I like it. There's a pure little beauty in this one-shot. I don't know how mature six-year olds are. Well, I'm guessing that they're about kindergarten, or a tad older, but I don't know if Pansy would be saying 'like'. For me, that seems to happen in the latter years of elementary or middle school.

Enough said about likes. I think that this one shot is very nice and clean and pure, and I enjoy it very much. :)

The part of her and her mother disappearing is very vague, though. Maybe you should plump that sentence with a description or something?? I'm not really sure, but it does seam plain.

All in all, this is another wonderful one shot! :)

Author's Response: True enough about the "like" thing, but she was trying to act older, remember. She's trying to act like she's mature and supirior to Neville. So she adds in words she's heard older girls say. Hmm... I may work on the disappearing thing. I think it works as is, but I see what you mean. Thanks for the tip. And thanks so much for the great review! Always nice to hear from you. =)

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