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Review:ilovedracoandharry says:
If I have ever read a story where slow movements and detailed thoughts fit perfectly it was this one. The precision of his movements and the way he made his way slower to his destiny and the moment that would change his life were brilliant. I'm impressed with the way you handled this situation and how you wrote it. Such a story idea could turn out exceptionally wrong depending on the way it was written and I think it takes a lot of thought and care to write it so carefully and cover every point and detail that is relevant to it. The chapter was a little short and the reason I suggest it to be longer was that it was so intriguing to read; another paragraph or two would have done it well but nevertheless and overall it was terrific. The way you depicted Snape's character on the whole and your ability to keep him so perfectly in canon was what made it exceptional, I believe.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, ilovedracoandharry! You're not the first to comment that it is rather short, but the truth is that I ran out of steam and didn't want to ruin the story by dragging it out. I am glad that you thought my Snape fit canon - I worried that he might have been a bit too overdone. Nonetheless, I thank you for the wonderful review.

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