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Review:the5thmarauder says:
I liked this chapter on the whole it was good. I liked the way you made the wedding realistic wiht her once again having short flashbacks as opposed to really long ones I have given you my opinion on those before and I am glad you have kept going along the same thread.

A couple of constructive crits are I mean you would think it’s there wedding it should be theirs I know it is only a typo but it was distracting. The other was the listing of the vows, I think that it was too much and that it was just uneccessary, I mean we all know what a muggle wedding is like and that those vows are spoken. You could say something like The vows were spoken or use the first line of the first vow and then say something like how much time transpired and the emotions of the two whilst they were speaking there vows. Overall well done!

Author's Response: sorry you didn't like the vows, after i looked back on it i realized it was kind of much to put in there, maybe just had one person say them and then the feelings as they were saying them, i don't thanks for reviewing though, and i changed that theirs for yuo! its nice to know i have fans other than for reading!

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