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Review:the5thmarauder says:
I liked it, I still think it was a tinsy bit short though. I think you need to also make sure that you don't have Ron moving too fast with Hope, she has known him barely a day, well barely 6 hours she would probs not be kissing him lovingly in the corridor in such a comfortable manner, that comes after at the minimum a couple of weeks. Also try not to rush the whole Harry thing aswell, maybe make it more gradual. Also try to make the chapters longer, you have a great writing talent, I would love o read longer chapters of it.


Now, for the good stuff, I liked the way you had her make that funny little comment on how she now basically had a new family, it made me chuckle a bit. I also liked the bit about Harry and Sirius, it was very well done and sensitively too. I also thought the grammar once more was excellent! Well done, and please update soon.

Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you!! the ron thing has to be done a little quickly, but i suppose it should go a little slower. there are more relationship issues as the story progresses and HUGE repercussions

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