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Review:Connaisance says:
*I* seem to be rambling a little making things a bit confusing, but things are getting clearer, please get Sale to loosen up a little, she's even worse then Mione. I wonder why *I* dont show any emotions in my eyes, while that is the place most people's emotions are detected. An interesting different story. i have one complaint though, you should put in a more descriptive summary, its not quite as appwaling as the story. (criticism sweetened with praise)

Author's Response: I think that probably has something to do with the fact that I ramble like crazy myself. Interesting habit. I don't think Sale will loosen up until she goes to Hogwarts again. ;) As to my summary, I know it's really vague, but I actually didn't have any idea where I was going to take the story at first, and I haven't ever gotten around to finishing planning. I'll probably change it at some point in time, though. Thank you! :)

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