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Review:Sue Bridehead says:
This has vivid descripions and intense emotions the reader can feel. It's fairly well-structured, despite a few run-on sentences, misspellings (raven-haired, Weasley), and punctuation problems. I was a bit confused when he went back in time; did he 'relive' a new life from that point so there were two Harry Potters? Did he just live out his 'other life' in obscurity so his future self could be happy? (I wasn't sure exactly what your intent was.) Still, I enjoyed it. :-)

Author's Response: well the Harry Potter who changed time couldn't just forget his first life, so yes he did live it out in obscurity, because he wanted the 'new' Harry Potter to live out a normal life, its a bit confusing that way I know.

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