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Review:Chic says:
Good job Senna! You finally finished your story! Now I have a bit of a critique for you...It seems your characters are all gorgeous. I know all of them are destined for another member of the clique of friends, but a group of beautiful, kind, generous, lovely friends seems kind of far-fetched. Don\'t take offense, but they are sort of mary-su-ish and gary-stu-ish. In the fifth book, everyone found out that Snape was a bit of an outcast, and James picked on him for no reason. Your story is pretty well-written, but doesn\'t fit very well with canon. I realize it must be hard to start a fiction and end it after the fifth book, which is full of contradicting information, but this is just some friendly advice. You might want to get a beta. I heard there are a bunch of! P.S. I told my bud daisy about your story and she loved it! *It was her introduction to fanfiction!*

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