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Review:Elf_ears13 says:
It seemed a bit rushed (particularly the dialogue, I'd like to see longer sentences/not so many commas: "Harry screamed out to her in pain and frustration, his last friend his little girl, his only comfort, died to save him, why does everyone do that!" could be three sentences if you changed it around a bit), but was overall just what we'd all like! I wonder. . .what would happen if JKR ended it like that? That would be something. . .but I like the idea behind it. It would be interesting if you continued to write it as an AU fic, perhaps, and showed how/if that would effect who would befriend him and the like.

Author's Response: thanks so much for your review, it was one of those, oh, ideas and must get out of head, without much planning at all.

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