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Review:JKButchr says:
AN excellent little story that you have going here. You know that i am not usually a fan of this particular ship, but you have managed to avoid many of the cliches that usually make H/H stories so difficult to read for me. I am a huge fan of Ron, and often in these types of stories people turn him evil or kill him off to get out of the way, but you have done neither of those things and have managed to keep him pretty much in character. For this I thank you. You tend to rely heavily on dialogue, which for a longer story can be a downfall, but the style fits your piece very well, though a little description might be called for in certain places. I also appreciate the fact that you appear to be taking things slowly. It is one of my biggest pet peeves when a story starts, and within a few paragraphs the couple is snogging despite not having romantic feelings before... it kind of defeats the purpose of the story, but again your pacing seems to be very good so far. So, I suppose I\'m looking forward to seeing where you are going with this despite the pairing :) I\'ll read anything as long as it entertains me, and your\'s does exactly that. -Butch

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