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Review:Elisha says:
Umm you should do a weird name like Caramella (which means sweet) or Amora (which means love) and then the other should be like a common name like Emily or Ashley or Laura or something. Also i do recommend you write about Hermione at Vicky's cause it woudl be great to know about how she feels about him and ron's chacnes with her and all sorts of stuff. im misspelling a lot, lol. Anyways you might have gone too deep into detail for the first two chapters cause you dont want to make the readers lose interest!! You were like right on the line of too much and not enough. Besides that it was an incredible story and i cant wait for an update

Author's Response: Thanx for the names, I'll use them, mark my words! As for adding too much detail for the first two chapters, call me stupid but I would really like it if you'd go further and tell me exactly where I should remedize (sp?). And as for Hermione's Christmas dinner at Krum's, I shall consider that. Because even though nothing like the plot summary's happened yet, it's coming up soon and it's going to take up much of the storyline. But I could have it in there anyways, if I'm in the mood for some juicy jeopardy between two boys, one internationally famous and one her best friend. thanx for the suggestions Elisha, you give me tons of experienced advice from the art of literature. lol i'll try to update by tomorrow, but I'm not betting my life on it! Check it out anyways. bye g2g sleeeeep

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