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Review:Elisha says:
That was great writing. The only thing that i would recommend is spacing out the conversations a bit more. Besides that i really wanna know what's going to happen next with Hermione and "Vicky" and what's going to happen to Ron and Hermione. Oo la la!! I can't wait!!! great job.

Author's Response: Thank u so much for the suggestions, Elisha it made me realize indeed the reason why I didn't really like what I wrote. But I'm not exatly the most confident person in the world in writing about the background and other matters other than conversation. Just dropping you a hint, Hermione IS indeed going over to 'Vicky' for Christmas dinner, though I don't think I'm going to write about it. The main plot is about Harry and Ron getting whizzed into the human world and meeting a pair of muggle girls. Surprisingly enough, I don't have a name for them, so if you can drop me a few ideas! lol

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