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Review:Hasane says:
It has almost been a year since I have read this story, and its vividness still rings clear in my mind.

I remember all of the characters, and how much I fell in love with your characters, and how much by the end of this chapter that I so wished for Albus, Piper, and Nick and all of the other Slytherins to have their—maybe not happy—hopeful ending.

Every part of this story is so amazing—it was literally everything I was looking for: strong friendships, but an undefined, and perhaps an even terrifying, future for the next generation kids. I love this rendition specifically because it acknowledges and works off the idea that maybe the Slytherin house would not be so redeemed after the war. I love that. This isn’t really a story I couldn’t pull off myself because I love my next generation kids too much to torture them like this. Fortunately, you did it for me. (I have no doubt in my mind that you love your characters though.)

I also love how you handle each and every one of your characters’ spirals into depression; in the beginning it was so hard for me to tell that anything was wrong in the first place. And then everything started to fall apart bit by bit, and we were starting to see how far into depression Albus—and everyone else—really was. It was insanely easy to turn against Albus’ family, and it was easy for me to get angry at them.

This also happens to be the one story that cemented in my mind that there is no place else for Albus except for Slytherin. And the chapter titles are so creative—I’m not sure whether they are part of a song or something like that, but they fit so well with the chapters you write. I think by far my favorite one is the most recent one: “I see (love) when I close my eyes”. I don’t know why, but I think something about that line struck a chord in me. It just—it fits Albus, Piper, and Nick so well. My heart literally hurts when I think about this line. I really couldn’t tell you why.

I honestly could not tell you how much I really love this story, and I think it would be impossible for me to stop singing praises about it. But I will. I sincerely hope that you’ll get the motivation to finish this story, but if not, this will be a story I will always come back to even when I stray far away from Harry Potter (if ever I do).

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