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Review:Puresnape says:
Hello! I really love your new plot twists and the new direction is so exciting! You are such an amazing writer and you really keep all the readers on our toes! I really thought that Sirius and Yves would be together but now, it seems that things are changing!

I love the interaction between Severus and Yves. I love how they bring the best out of each other and how they can be so comfortable with each other to talk more personally. I love how they are so witty each other and I love her new necklace, the scavenger hunt and their date!!! :) I really get the sense that Yves is really falling for Severus- not just because of his looks,but because of who is as a person!

The new element about Sirius is so facinating and intiruging. You almost get the impression that he is OBSESSED with Yves and almost acts like he wants to possess her or own her by trying to seduce her into being with him! However, Sirius focuses too much on the latter that he forgets what really makes Yves fall for a guy- his character, their growing friendship and his confidence ( lack of games).

However all despite this, I feel so sorry for Sirius. You really show that things are not going well for him and that he does have hardships that he needs to face. I like how you showed a darkness in his character that is there- a darkness that is dangerous and alluring. I felt so disappointed in his actions in this chapter. Thank you so much for highlighting that even the best of people ( Sirius really is a pretty nice and cool guy when he wants to be!), can have their own inner darkness. You sum it so well in this line : " Sirius Black was dangerous. If he could use one of his friends in the worst possible: to kill someone and place his best friend in danger like that… I had been looking out for Voldemort but I should have been looking out for Sirius. " That line is so poignant, so true, so real!

Anyway, you are really such a great writer and I am really looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Oh wow! I always love reading your reviews. You really get exactly what I'm going for. I love the dynamic between Severus and Yves, the more I write, the more I love where they're going. But I do also feel so sorry for Sirius. He is sort of obsessed with her, it's almost as though it doesn't matter what he does, his thoughts keep on looping and come right back to her.
The coming chapters have been very difficult to write because I am so torn about where to go, that's why they've been so delayed in uploading.

And thank you so much for the compliments! You seriously make me cry! And thanks for reading!

Much love!

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