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Review:DougA says:
Not bad for the first chapter of your first fan fiction.I did think it felt a little rushed, with a lot going on in a short span. I imagine the quartet having a lot more injuries then just bruises and scratches. Harry in particular should be pretty banged up. He had been up since Shell Cottage, had the whole bank robbery and escape incident, then the battle, which included him being "killed" and having the cruciatus curse used on him several times, with his body being tossed in the air.

Still, it is a good start, although I feel you should have taken a little more time with it. And Ron letting Ginny into the Boy's Dorm, without so much as a peep, or visible injury/bat bogey gives a pretty good indication that he is OK now with the idea of Harry and Ginny together.

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