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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Hello!

This piece absolutely broke my heart (but I'm surprisingly okay with the way you handled the twist of events).

I felt so bad for Molly, though! Apparently, Chris is a jerk -- who just avoids someone instead of telling them that they were no longer interested/seeing somebody else! Jeesh, this guy.

I love that this happened though because it's more realistic than a happily ever after.

As a stand-alone chapter, it held its own nicely and it tied into the other two pieces in a tearful conclusion.

Excellent work overall. I'll be announcing winners on the Forums and possible also on twitter/tumblr.

Thanks so much for entering, Lo! And forgive me for being SO very late with these reviews!

-Rumpel

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