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Review:BBHP says:
I'm enjoying this! It's funny and dark and dramatic and awkward, all at once. Maybe it's just my own cynical nature, but I'm not sure I trust Emma? She seems like she could be a real friend who is getting Alice to step out of her comfort zone a bit, but she also seems a I don't know. I DO know, however, that I can't stand that Margaret girl! She seems so fake and petty and clingy. I can just imagine her having these long, manicured, gaudy fingernails that she's digging into James to keep hold of him, but more for his status and name than because she actually cares for him. Why else would she be snogging him so publicly in the office kitchen? She seems super classy. Not. Maybe I'm reading too much into it though. Ha.

Anyway, I'm loving this story so far and I'm so excited to read more.

Author's Response: Hi BBHP!

I'm so glad you're enjoying Strained! As for Emma, I think she may appear a bit off because she's such a contrast to Alice (AKA ~very~ outgoing). Although Alice loves her, I think she is maybe still finding it a bit difficult to adapt to being around such an extrovert, haha. Hopefully in the next couple of chapters, you'll come to trust her more :)

Ah, Margaret! She is indeed as you describe, haha. Though when you think about it, James is a bit at fault for interacting with someone like her, too... more on this will be revealed in later chapters!

I am updating SUPER soon. I'm almost done the next chapter! I'm so excited to publish it :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing; I love reading people's reactions!!

Sofia xxx

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