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Review:astoryending says:
This was almost a bit freaky, but I decided last week to read this again from the beginning (because I just missed your little corner of the magical world) and then when I was half way through it I noticed a new chapter!! I’m not kidding you, I actually ‘holy sht’-ed out loud, complete with a dance and everything! This made my week for sure :)

Now, JK is like the queen of naming characters. But what stood out to me in your story from the very beginning was that you’ve obviously put thought and effort into naming yours in a way that makes it ‘fit into’ the magical world just that bit better. Names has always been something that I get a bit hung up on when I’m reading books and stories, often being a bit annoyed that it doesn’t fit properly, so this is a big thing for me haha!

I can’t believe James would do that for her. Well… I kind of do. But the fact that he just risked everything for her speaks volumes of his character and I love him even more, which I didn’t even think I could ;) but poor Seth. So many feelings and trying to separate them and identify them (at sixteen as well) is not the easiest… I get that feeling of wanting to do it by yourself and not wanting to be saved, so I understand why it upsets her to realise that maybe she actually needed just that.

Their whole relationship is so dynamic but still there’s those teenage issues and insecurities at the core that make it even more real and believable.

I had a sneaking suspicion that the gravitas potion would come back in some shape or form, it was all just so fishy to begin with. But the question is still WHY and WHO and WHY!?! Every chapter just keeps bringing it, and I truly think every time that you’re so talented, both with your storyline and your writing. So eager to see where this whole thing ends up!

Lastly, I’m hoping that your boyfriend is recuperating nicely at home (having to stay for an elongated period of time at the hospital is just the worst, for everyone) and I’m sending you a bear hug through my screen! xo

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