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Review:classicblack says:
So I now see why you may move completely to HPFT because that. was. STEAMY! A really great chapter overall. It was really unexpected (but not in a bad way) to have an entire chapter dedicated to this, but I didn't mind. Your descriptions, your imagery were beautifully written. Great job!

Happy writing,
classicblack

P.S. You may have answered this before, but are you planning on writing all the way up to their deaths?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm so happy you liked it. I actually wasn't planning or sure about how I'd handle their first time moment and then when I got started I realized how much I wanted to give them this, and show their level of respect for one another instead of just sort of brushing over it.

Yes, I'm planning on writing this until the very end ;(.

Thanks again for your feedback!!
Jami


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