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Review:Puresnape says:
Hello again! What a wonderful chapter! So much things are happening!! :) I love the way you write and I just keep checking almost everyday to see if there is an update! This is absolutely my favourite story on here :)

First of all, you did a great job at characterising Yves. I understand why she feels so angry. She probably feels so fed up with everyone around her trying to manipulate or use her for their own ends. Sirius, her family, and maybe even Snape. You did a great job in showing that side to her and explaining to us why she feels so closed off from the world:)

You also did a really good job with the Sirius scene. Here, I really thought you showed a side of Sirius that he does not show very often- his vulnerable, authentic true self. Behind the bravado and his games, Sirius really at heart is a decent, loyal and nice person :) His apology to Yves was really sweet! That touch with the dog worked beautifully with showing the truth about who Sirius really is. I am so glad they made up :)

However no! I was so enjoying that friendship/attraction between Snape and Yves. I actually think that Snape and Yves actually have potential to have a decent romantic relationship more than with Sirius at this point in the story. I don't know why- but your portrayal of Snape has really grown on me:) I really hope that he is not using her to join the Death Eaters or planning to hurt her. However, I got a feeling that Snape does actually have feelings towards her, so it will be interesting to watch how that will unfold during the rest of the story:)

Author's Response: Hi darling! Your favourite story! I'm actually dying! Thank you!

Yeah, I thought Sirius, until now, was an absolute ass and, even though the reader knows he's a good guy, Yves also needs to know it.

I am absolutely in love with Snape also! And you will be seeing a lot more of him. I love his relationship with Yves. I know it isn't as intense as with Sirius, but it is still hella hot.

However, in the coming few chapters, I think you may come to love Sirius even more. But we'll see ;) There is still a lot of story left so you have quite a bit of reading still coming. I even have plans for a sequel :)

As always, thank you so much for reading!

xxx


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