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Review:Puresnape says:
Exciting!!! I love how the plot is heading so far :) I am really enjoying the new Snape-Yves dynamic! I love how Snape dances with her in front of everyone and is clearly interested in Yves! I find her interaction with Snape to be a clear contrast to Sirius so far.

Snape and Yves appears to me to be a friendship/slight attraction to each other. Both bring out the best parts of each other and appreciate each other personalities. Snape is quiet, observant, serious, intelligent and bold-very straightforward with Yves.

In contrast, Sirius is the opposite of Snape. He is intensely passionate, emotional and brave. But he is jealous easily and plays games with Yves, which seems to push him away from her. Their interaction is passionate, unpredictable and kind of lustful..

Anyway, great character development and I love the contrasts of the characters! Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! That's exactly the characterization I was going for. The next few chapters are written and edited so I'm literally waiting for validation.
Thank you so much for always taking the time to comment and review. I really appreciate it. And for reading so in depth. I'm so glad it's coming across the way I was hopiong it would.

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