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Review:BBHP says:
EVERYTHING IS SO CONFUSING. It's great, don't get me wrong, but even I would pay 500 Galleons to the person who figures out what the H is happening. Poor Jenny. She's on the verge of a nervous breakdown. The drama is just building up and I feel like even though she's had these little angry bursts, it's nowhere near how it will be when she actually explodes.

And what the #$%, Luke! They told him Jenny fancies him!? Why even would they do that? It seems like Dom invented this elaborate plan/test and it just blew up. I won't even get started on Dom because right now I just want to scream at her. Ha.

It's easy to say, "oh, teenage drama, it's so trivial," but your story reminds me that it's still real. These poor teens being tricked and lied to and feeling desperate and confused and scared. I just feel so bad for Jenny. She can't even catch a break.

Anyway, you've done an excellent job with this. Conveying all these different emotions, while keeping everything so confusing and crazy is just amazing. I'm so impressed. Every chapter has me reeling from some new revelation.

Author's Response: I KNOW I'M SORRY!! Everything WILL be cleared up in like the next two chapter I promise!!! Oh god, the predictions do not bode well hahaha. But yeah, she truly is on the verge of a nervous breakdown - I just said this in a previous review but Jenny absolutely loathes lying and all of the lying from her closest friends is doing her head in.

I KNOW. I KNOW. I DON'T KNOW! No - I'm kidding, I do know lol I write the story after all. And LOL, Dom deserves a bit of screaming at.

That's so encouraging to hear because sometimes I do feel like I'm losing the thread of reality and toeing the cringey and cheesy lol so even though I feel bad that you feel so bad for Jenny, it actually makes me also feel good? Because that at least means I'm doing my job as a writer haha.

Thank you so much - seriously, thank you. I don't feel like I deserve this praise but I'm going to continue work hard on this and hope that I do!

Can't wait to see what you think of the next two chapters!! x P


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