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Review:DougA says:
Okay, this is a decent enough start. I always thought that, having spent his months on the run watching Ginny's dot on the map, that JKR should have had him looking for her as soon as Riddle was dead, instead of deciding that he had weeks and months and years to talk to him. The Ginny of canon would have bat bogied multiple times for his lack of good sense.

I do have a few quibbles. (1) I don't believe that Ron and Hermione would have left Harry. (2) As Harry basically collapses on the floor, I don't believe that Ginny would not have sought a Healer for him. (3) Harry then passes out, still on the floor, and still no effort for medical attention. Maybe Ginny was annoyed with him afterall. (4)Harry passes into sleep, apparently still on the floor, and Ginny apparently goes to sleep with him there. (5) Harry's nightmares cause Ron and Hermione to join them, but only Ron and Hermione. Is no one else in Gryffindor ? And they still leave Harry (and Ginny) on the floor. (6) Ginny breaks down sobbing after Hermione's words, and Ron and Hermione then go back to sleep and leave her sobbing ? Okay, Ron maybe, but not Hermione.

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