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Review:Puresnape says:
Hello there! I am so happy to finally sit down and have a great read of your fan fiction. You are such a delightful and descriptive writer. All of the characters breathe from the page and I feel they are real people with real issues. I am so drawn between the relationship between Chloe and Sirius and I am so looking forward to a new update!!

This current chapter was brilliant. I felt like I was running away with the characters outside, trying to escape from the chaos. I really identified when Chloe begins avoiding everyone and pretends to be okay that is normal human behavior. Anyway, please keep writing and looking forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: Hello hello!

Thank you so much for leaving a review. This fic is such a labor of love and I will continue it regardless of feedback, but it's always so nice to read!

Chloe and Sirius are so fun to write together. I feel like they eschew a lot of the romantic stereotypes (which I have 100% written before) and don't fall in either the Friends to Lovers camp or the Enemies to Lovers camp. They require a lot of patience to write, and I have to remind myself that at this point in the story, they're just kids--they are going to change and grow so much, not necessarily together, and I need to take my time to let their "relationship" fully form.

One of the things I wanted to write (and it appears more in the next chapter) is how people deal with trauma. I always thought it was so interesting that MWPP, especially James and Peter, had this cavalier, devil-may-care attitude about a lot of what was happening around them. Namely being chased by Death Eaters on Sirius's motorbike; that story has always had an air of "the good old days" and classic James and Sirius causing trouble. But it really must have been awful and terrifying for it to happen--so how are these people so brave and how do they keep up their appearance of positivity and humor?

I've been writing for like 7 straight hours and am a little brain dead, so I hope this made sense ;)

Thank you! ♥

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