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Review:Heather says:
I don't know what to think really. I like that James is coming to terms with his accident and how he can move forward, but I don't think Cassie has earned anything to take credit in it. Not only because she left him and Cadence before, but also because of how she's treated James since she came back. James is far to easy on her, and I really hope that him being so thankful is only because she gave him a chance to talk to Henri, and it's not an opening for her to come back into his life. Cassie can grow up and change, but James still deserves better. I also think his acceptance was a bit rushed, he's spent months being down and just a few sentences from a stranger helps him overcome it all? But I can kind of look over that since he does need to move forward at some point-- I think my main problem is Cassie's involvement in it, because as I said, she hasn't earned it as a person to be involved. But I do like that Cassie is talkning to Cadence, at the same time as I'm a bit vary because Cassie's got an awful track record and a child does not deserve to be abandoned (even if it's just by a friend) and I hope James is a bit on his guard.

As you probably can tell, I'm not a fan of Cassie, even though she helped James in this chapter. I don't think there's anything she can do to redeem herself to me, but I still enjoy reading this story for all the side characters and it's really well written! Thank you for this chapter :)

Author's Response: Hi Heather! Thanks for all your thoughts.

I completely agree with you about Cassie. Most of what she does is fairly unforgivable and James is probably too quick to let it go. But I'm glad you enjoyed her talking to Cadence.

He definitely hasn't accepted his situation yet, but this is the first time he's seen that it might be possible to in the future.

So glad you're still reading and enjoying it! Thanks for taking the time to review! Emma xx


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