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Review:Giu9_RedandGold says:
Hi! I've just read the first two chapters. I have to admit Dahlia is more likable than I thought she would be. Even in the original ff, she was quite fun to read, but writing an entite story with her as the lead character I think is a brave choice. I've read many story with a cynical, rude, annoying, unpleasent and just generally unlikable protagonist, but they often end up making her simply annoying and not someone I want to read about! So,good job,because so far I'm very interested in Dahlia (more than I was in the first story) and I'm curious to read more!

Ps. I love the fact that she just disapparated away after that DO YOU WANT TO KISS ME AS MUCH AS I WANT TO KISS YOU?"

Author's Response: Hey!

Honestly, writing a fic with Dahlia as the POV character was terrifying for that very reason. Because in my head, I have a specific idea of what she's like and what motivates her, but I didn't know whether she would just come off as bratty in the fic. But I just had to write her in the end :P

So basically, I'm glad you're interested in her and she hasn't come off as annoying as hell haha.

Lol, what's the point of an apparition license if you can't just zap away after bluntly rejecting someone's advances?

Plums xo


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