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Review:kayt says:
I've wanted to find a good long HP story for ages, and here it is. As I eventually had to stop reading last night I thought I should make a comment - when something long is posted it is too easy to just keep pressing the next button.
This is an unusual style for HP FF which makes a nice change, and I like lots of detail so I'm very happy. I was at one point finding Livia too clever (but she is a Ravenclaw, and I'd have been a Hufflepuff) and perfect to believe, so it's been good to see her having a few difficulties in the last couiple of chapters. While she was disappointed that Christopher didn't really exist, I'd been disappointed that he did. It's really good to read something that gives Snape a proper character. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you. Is school/university interfering with continuing (I suppose I should have started posting sooner)? It is a weird balance with Livia being clever and having foresight (you all do too, essentially, which removes a certain tension at times that can be detrimental or at least unconventional). I gave Snape a character if a repressed one and Christopher is essentially an expression of the "what if" nature of that. He never saw that coming, either; that wasn't his intent in 1989. If I tell you that I began writing this in January of 2016, you probably know why I did it. I left only vague clues of that in the text, though. For example, internal logic would make his first name an odd choice, but my reasons are different. Anyway, I'm glad it addresses something that works for you.

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