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Review:Nyx's Redbird says:
Hi Lily, I'm so glad I decided to honor your wishes and check this story out. I'm in love! The comedic elements you add to your narrative when you're showcasing Lyra's thoughts are to die for and I've laughed out loud several times when reading this chapter.

You've done an excellent job establishing a dynamic with the Malfoy family and a great job at introducing the characters. I couldn't help but cringe with Lyra when her brother started making out with his boyfriend. Not in a bad way, I would cringe too if I witnessed my brother making out with his significant other. Kind of in one of those "eww that's my brother what do you see in him?" ways. Anyway...

I really did enjoy reading this chapter and I can't tell you how much I'm looking forward to reading the next several.

Nyx's Redbird

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