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Review:ralph says:
Oh Lily what a gem, I feel like she can sense that Sirius could like Chloe too if it weren't for all these other factors in the way. Something about his infatuation with Marlene doesn't sit right with me someone like Chloe is much more complimentary to the dark aura of Mr Black.
But Marlene is so lovely going out of her way to Be friends with Chloe you have to respect that. Can't wait to see Chloe and sirius' relationship blossom and bloom

Author's Response: Hey there!

Lily really is such a gem. There are so many characters that I want to write more about, particularly her and James, and Frank and Alice, but Marlene/Chloe/Sirius are definitely the crux of this story. There are SO many Marauders' characters that need to be ignored just for the sake of brevity and moving this story along. But they get their due attention when possible!

I like "the dark aura of Mr. Black," hehe. He's very cavalier and lets things roll off his shoulders in public, but you're right, he's got a lot of issues having dealt with a mother that doesn't love him and--oh wait, wow, could that possibly be why he's pursuing a woman who doesn't seem interested in him??? ;) (I was seriously so excited to write about his Oedipal complex, like, you have no idea.)

Marlene is indeed lovely. It was so so SO important to me that this wasn't a "girl vs girl" type of romantic issue. Marlene is, in a lot of ways, a better friend that Chloe--more nurturing, more willing to adapt to a person's needs. And in some ways she falls short. She can be pushy, which we'll see more of as the story continues.

Thank you so much! Chapter ten is in the queue! ♥

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