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Review:Siriuslover says:
I wonder why Sirius is looking at her like that in the end. This and those electrifying looks they've shared seem to be pointing to something that hasn't been written openly about yet. I love this sense of mystery that they both have within themselves. And I can't wait to hear the explanation for why Marlene doesn't respond to Sirius she was so close to explaining but you had to leave us hanging!! A wonderful way to fuel my interest. I absolutely loved how you created the first physical intimacy between Sirius and Chloe, by passing on the kiss Marlene almost gave his touch away to Chloe and I feel as if this is significant somehow and I can't wait to read more you truly are talented and dare I say underrated I'm slightly shocked at how good this is but the lack of reviews. I hope you get the attention you deserve soon but please do keep writing for us readers because this is so different to the usual Sirius oc story there's so much pain and angst and that means good romance to come. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much for taking the time to review ♥

You're right, there are a lot of unspoken tensions within this group--for all of their camaraderie and authenticity, they don't talk about their feelings properly. Particularly Sirius and Marlene (and Chloe, who speaks about as frequently as a houseplant.) Mostly what you're seeing at the end of this chapter is Sirius realizing that Marlene truly might not have feelings for him. Jealousy isn't the right word; he's upset that their kiss, which was an indescribably huge event for him, was not the same for her, and that she was so indifferent as to kiss someone else, almost as a joke. She probably thinks that he is just acting the way he is because they're under the influence of hallucinogens, when really it was the first time he was given the courage to do it and probably planned it out all week and talked Remus and Sirius and Peter's ears off about how this was the night he was FINALLY going to kiss her. And it totally didn't land.

tl;dr it was two people not seeing eye-to-eye on what their kiss meant.

I love, love, LOVE what you said about the first physical intimacy between Sirius and Chloe. I honestly hadn't really thought about it like that, but you're right. Marlene has been such a conduit for them in getting to know one another, and now she is physically a conduit for their first "kiss."

Thank you so much for your review! I've just put the next chapter in the queue, so hopefully we'll see it up in the next few days.

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