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Review:Oceancy says:
Amazing update like always. I can't wait to see how this story ends, and I'm willing to wait it through. All this drama— my new dislike for Sebastian despite the fact that I actually shipped Marissa with him in the beginning— is definitely keeping me on the edge of my seat.

I'm a little curious though, we hear a lot about Mary when she's in the (present?) time, but I wonder how she's like in the past. No doubt she's probably more or less the same way as Marissa, sitting away from the group but is she as comfortable with Remus? Has she made any attempt to talk to Sirius or the others?

I definitely can't wait till the next update ahdjdjsjs. I hope we see more of James (II) because he's just so precious and hands down my favourite character at the moment (all though Marissa isn't too bad herself.)

Author's Response: Ahh my first Marbastian shipper! Although I'm assuming that ship has sailed now, with his creepy behaviour?

I did think about whether readers would wonder about Mary in 1977, as obviously I have this idea of her in my head but I've realised I haven't quite portrayed that. I was considering doing a POV switch in the near future, to see things from Mary's perspective and gain more of an idea of her general character, but we'll see :) To answer your questions, she's definitely not as comfortable with Remus - their personalities just aren't as compatible as Remus and Marissa's are. She hasn't made much effort to talk to Sirius and co as she thinks herself above them - especially if they're ignoring her, she feels as though if they don't appreciate her company then they don't deserve it anyway. She's a bit of a diva that way.

I'm so excited that people are genuinely looking forward to my next updates, I've never stuck with a story long enough to have this so it's so exciting for me, and definitely compels me to put in the effort to update faster. :) James (II)/Jay is a definite favourite of mine and we will certainly be seeing more of him! He wasn't even a significant part of the original plot but I changed the whole story for the purpose of giving him a larger part to play, simply because I love him so much :)

I am roughly halfway through chapter 16 so hopefully I'll finally be updating soon, although I'm going away for a week tomorrow so it will probably be after that.

Thank you so so much for reading and for your lovely review! xx

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