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Review:BBHP says:
I kind of suspected that might happen! Poor Nic, having her mom show up!

I loved Dom's bluntness. She got straight to the point of asking who Nic is without any fluffy introductions. I also liked that Dom and Rose didn't use their last names. I wonder if they're just sick of the attention or if they're so used to everyone knowing their last name already.

James pretending to fumble for Nicolette's name was so funny to me, especially after Dom's "mystery girl" comment. Of course he'd remember her - she's not exactly forgettable - and I love that he tried to play it cool. Also, I'm very interested for Albus to show up in the following chapters. He or Louis might turn into my favourite characters, just because they're funny and seem a bit full of themselves.

Nicolette seems more mature for her years, so the bits about her feeling giddy that James mentioned her, or being dazed around Louis and thinking of Dom as "less of a threat" reminds me that Nicolette is still a teenager with teenage hormones.

The casual, quick acceptance of a half-giant being at Hogwarts was awesome. Whether it's because Nicolette is naturally accepting or because opinions towards "half-breeds" have changed since before the war, it was perfect.

And then poor Nicolette - not only does McGonagall make her stand up in front of everyone, but she also reveals that Nic was a hatstall! And then the reveal of Nic's mother working at Hogwarts. It'd be too much to take in! Why, oh why didn't Nic's parents tell her! Parents can be so weird sometimes, thinking "hey they'll like this surprise" when really, if Nicolette had had even a MINUTE to adjust to the idea...

Anyway, another long, scatter-brained review from me on your excellent story. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and the interactions between Nicolette and the other students. Looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response: Ah thank you! High five and hug for you too :)

I'm glad you noticed the bits about nic being slightly mature, yet still hormone-induced since she is only a tee anger still. I'm hoping that society is a bit more accepting towards half-breeds (it is 2023 after all), but who knows? Im thinking that her parents were more like that and therefore their kids' opinions are open-minded as well.

McGonagall - I know right? I think adults just either don't know or remember what it's like to be called out, or they totally do and want to embarrass them since they're on the adult side too. Who knows what goes through their brains.

Thanks for your kind review, I am excited for you guys to read more! Especially since now we're at the school part :)

-Morgan xoxo

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