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Review:Rachel says:
While this is not my favorite chapter because of the lack of Jay and dialogue, I enjoyed seeing things look up for Marissa. I'm glad she's making friends in Mary's time.

They way you wrote the last paragraph was beautiful. I loved way you wrote about her finding Sirius effortless and leading to his infidelity. I hope there's a confrontation with her and Sirius next chapter.

Author's Response: Aww there will be much more Jay and much more dialogue to come, don't worry! Ah thank you so much, I don't think it's something Marissa can ignore especially due to his reaction to her 'cheating'! I'm really excited to get started on the next chapter but everything's a little crazy at the moment so I can only squeeze in time for writing here and there, but I intend for chapter 16 to be published within the next few weeks - hopefully a little sooner but no promises! Thank you, as always, for your lovely review, they really are appreciated xx

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