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Review:Glisten says:
Your mention at the beginning was so sweet! Thank you so much!

Goodness there's just so much to discuss with this chapter! I guess I'll start off by saying it was super fun to read and that I give you a big thumbs up on that Sorting Hat song. It totally sounded like something the hat would say in the books. You've got awesome rhyming abilities!

It was neat to read about Anusha on the boat ride. It's true isn't it? Sometimes you'll have something beautiful that you see everyday but it's only when someone else sees it for the first time that you realize that you have a lot to appreciate.

I loved reading about McGonagall! You don't see her in many fics these days and when you do she's more often than not out of character. Not with you though! I really feel like you captured the "McGonagall Vibe" if that can be considered a thing.

I love how Nic started asking questions for the Transfiguration test. So smart! I enjoyed reading about her tests and sorting. Based off her assessments she's defiately got Ravenclaw traits! The hat made the right choice with her I think. Although, it really seemed to be debating the other houses for awhile. Wonder if that will tie into the story in later chapters.

I remember reading on Pottermore that McGonagall had a long hat stall. I wonder if Nic was the longest hatstall since McGonagall? It says a little more than half a century, right? And McGonagall is younger than she was portrayed in the movies so it's possible I guess. H M M M

You know there's this test online that has all of JK's sorting hat questions in one quiz (because the one on pottermore changes questions every time and doesn't show them all). It always ties me between Gryffindor and Ravenclaw but I'd want to be in Ravenclaw just to hear all the cool riddles! The riddle there was very clever I've never heard that one before. I actually stopped reading to figure it out and the first thing an thought of was a scuba diver (one of those ones that don't show any skin) but then I realized that wasn't cool enough to be the answer so I thought about it a little more and eventually figured it out. I feel like being a Ravenclaw would be awesome because (for me at least) solving riddles is super fun but I feel like I'd suck at trying to figure it out when other people are entering with you because it'd add pressure and that would be distracting.

I want to see this common room in real life! How cool would that be! You made it sound so lovely. Maybe it's a good thing it's not real because I'd probably literally move into a place like that.

Oh and also the detail about the mermaid window was great I love how you add little things like that from the books. It really makes your writing scream "QUALITY!"

I was so happy when I saw how long this chapter was! You're spoiling us, really (not that I'm complaining of course)! I'm so excited for the train, feast, first night, and most certainly that surprise. I'll be waiting for that next chapter! 10/10 as usual!

Author's Response: oh my goodness thank you for your kind words (again)!!! i love all your reviews, it helps me better understand what my readers enjoy, don't enjoy, what they want, don't want, etc. they really keep me going!

i honestly love reading little references and hints in fics and it's super fun to write them! also, my small hints and things (like the sorting hat) has to tie things into the story later on. i hope you guys end up liking it.

thank you for the sorting hat part! i wasn't sure if i should have posted it or not, since it was kind of a simple couplet poem, but i enjoyed writing it! and also mcgonagall is one of my fave characters and i'm definitely trying hard to keep true to her character from how JK portays her. she's really a fun woman.

even though i claim myself a slytherin (even though i've also been sorted into every other house and think i'm also part ravenclaw), the ravenclaw common room always attracted me the most. i love the airy feel pottermore has described it and think Nicolette will enjoy it a lot. even if she does need to get past riddles to get to it.

please stay tuned to the next chapter, i'm going to try and get it up tuesday or wednesday! :):)

-Morgan


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