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Review:BBHP says:
Okay, I cannot say enough how much I enjoyed this chapter! It was excellent in every way.

The bit about Mr. Moretti being slightly possessive was adorable. And I love how in love he and Mrs. Moretti are. More couples should be this affectionate and sweet towards each other! Mr. Moretti's reactions to everything in the magical world are really cute, too.

I thought it was very realistic that Nicolette and her parents got to take a tour of Hogwarts before the year began. And it was neat that they got to take the boats like the first years do. As a transfer student, it would make sense for Nicolette to get a bit of "special" treatment. And your description of the castle and her parents' reactions! I love the little details, from the stained glass window with the mermaid (Goblet of Fire!) to the view of the stars being beautiful from the tallest tower (Astronomy!). Little details like that that tie into the books just make my heart go pitter-patter.

I really enjoyed reading about the "tests". Nicolette's smart remarks ("How many kittens?") (also, of course McGonagall would choose kittens!) and knowledge were impressive. It made sense that she'd be sorted into Ravenclaw, given her talent and wit.

The Sorting Hat's song was so clever! I love that you included it! And that Nicolette was a hatstall -- I'm VERY interested to see how that affects things later. I've felt from the beginning that Nicolette probably had a lot of qualities from all the houses in her, so it makes sense that the Hat would take a while to sort her.

I literally laughed out loud when I read her reaction to finding that instead of a password, she has to solve a freaking riddle. That would be my reaction, too. Although, the Ravenclaw Common Room sounds like such a beautiful space, and I just wish it were real so I could live there, too!

Anyway, I'll say it again: I loved this chapter! Can't wait for the next one with that surprise! (Aaand sorry for the long review. Couldn't help it!)

Author's Response: Ah omg thank you!! I LOVE long reviews! I'm really happy at least one person picked up on the little details and references to the tour, I'm hoping to add some more of those things, since it's Nicolette's first time expieriencing this stuff. I'm glad you enjoyed the Sorting because it does in fact tie into the story! I think Ravenclaw will be a good fit for Nicolette, we but we'll see what she and others think :)

Thanks for your review! I will hopefully get chapter 6 up sooner than last time, expect it in a few days

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