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Review:Glisten says:
It's totally weird that you mention Powell's City of Books since I just came out of there and am now sitting in the doughnut shop down the street. I'm in Oregon on vacation at the moment and I just thought it was a total coincidence that you mentioned that.

I'm going to take a guess here and say that the boy who looksd like James was Albus Potter? I have to admit that at first I thought that James had actually forgotten about her. That would be so sad though! She's been thinking about him every now and then and for him to just forget her would suck. But no, I realized when you said that he was eye level that he was probably Al.

I wonder who those blonde boys next to him were? I'm guessing one of them was Scorpius by I'm not sure who the other one could be. An original character, maybe?

This Anusha girl seems pretty kind and knowledgeable but I don't see her being more than an acquaintance to Nic. They just don't seem to have much common ground apart from reading and by the sound of it Anusha is all business with this Head Girl thing. They might get closer if Nic is sorted into Ravenclaw... I guess I'll have to see next chapter!

Oh one more thing! I love the added details on the bookshop. It makes sense to have an isle for seventh years though, doesn't it? I mean, most seventh years probably don't care about anything beyond the required reads. Very clever.

Oh, ONE MORE one more thing! I like how you gave us an update on how Ollivander and George Weasley's businesses are doing. It's no surprise that Weasley's Wizard Wheezes expanded and Ollivander defiately had to get help after a little while. After all, in the books he was pretty old in the Deathly Hallows so imagine how old he must be in a next generation fic? Then again, wizards DO live alot longer than us muggles, I suppose.

Great chapter I can't wait for the next one to come out! This is turning out to be a very nice story indeed!

Author's Response: Ahhh! Thank you so much for your feedback! It means so much to me, gives me more motivation to finish the next chapter!

I went to Powell's as well earlier this year, it's so fun to explore! And I love how you picked up on the small details, usually people pass over them and then don't realize the foreshadowing!

There are a lot of things that I give my own assumptions to (when it's not already on Pottermore) in order to give them some type of background - like the Ollivander and WWW thing.

Thanks for your kind words, as well as your review from my last chapter! I'm hoping to get it posted tonight or tomorrow, I've been a little behind since I started this new job up until school starts again, but I'm trying to post a couple times a week, if not once a week at least! Give me grace haha.

xoxo, Morgan

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