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Review:astoryending says:
I was so sure I'd already left you a review on one of the previous chapters but then realised I hadn't so this will be a mash-up of things!

I love how descriptive you are in your writing especially when you describe scenery and feelings. That is always something I tend to miss in certain FF and makes me not want to read, so I just love the way your writing flows. Also bravo on having such a unique setting for this! I love love love Hogwarts but it is refreshing having this play out someplace so different, makes the characters seem more free.

Your characters are so messed up, but in a good way? Does that make any sense, haha? I just think it makes them so relatable. They all have really obvious flaws, most from just being teenagers because that just tend to be a generally messed up time :) Dom is batsh--crazy in the BEST way and Jenny is such a good counterpart to that. They balance each other out. I am very interested to see if their dynamic will change should the storyline of Jenny and Luke continue. Ooh intrigue!

Jenny and James, boy is there a whole lotta crap there. James is being a grade a douche and Jenny really need to demand to know what it is he thinks sheís done! I donít think she is entirely innocent, maybe unknowingly so, but she needs to stand up for herself I think. They are both being stubborn and immature (teenagers) and all the angst!! Big fat love on that. ;)

In conclusion, I love this to bits! Sooo curious to see how everything will transpire over the coming chapters!

Hugs all around!

Author's Response: Hahaha, no worries! I'm so happy you left a review at all!!

Thank you so much! It always feels wrong somehow when it's 80% dialogue and there's no description or indicators of emotional shifts to ground it so thank you for noticing that!!! I try really hard to make sure the feelings make sense, and I never really know if I accomplish that well enough so this has been a big boost hahaha.

And I know right?! Hogwarts can be somewhat limiting in what the students can do--i.e. parties, Quidditch, school--but it's been such a strange pleasure to realise that even when they're not at Hogwarts, they're still just as limited with the illusion of freedom. But I agree, it's definitely unique getting to know the characters not at Hogwarts lol. It'll be interesting if the story ever leads them back...

I KNOW hahaha. No I'm so glad you've pointed out that, they are all actually so inherently flawed and stupid and yet loveable at the same time (I hope?) that you're like urgh, jesus just be perfect already! But then they wouldn't be as interesting. And oh god, Dom is totally batsh*t crazy. You have no idea my friend.

Jenny and James are the two most annoying people on the planet and I love them hahahaha. I don't know if it's easy to tell, but it's been a fairly short amount of time between the break up and now, so they're both still confused and angry with each other (god knows why James is angry) and their both in this state of like, I'M not talking about it first, YOU did the wrong thing. So definitely, definitely Jenny needs to just ask him and get the flipping truth!!! The angst is so unreal hahah it's gonna get so much worse, I'm putting these poor guys through emotional hell lol.

THANK YOU!!! I'm so happy this has piqued your curiosity, I can't wait for you read the next couple of chapters!!

Love always P xxx

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