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Review:BBHP says:
I loved this chapter. There are just so many things that I'm dying to know! For starters, James's dream! And then the tension between Jenny and Luke - that's drama waiting to happen (and I can't wait).

And, perhaps most importantly, what is James accusing Jenny of!? He's being so proud and obnoxious and it's driving me bonkers. He's got to know Jenny well enough to know she isn't lying, but still he's putting her through the wringer. You just don't do that someone you supposedly care about, no matter what you suspect they did. I kind of don't want them to end up together simply because of his rotten attitude. And cheating on his poor, unsuspecting girlfriend...I have no words. It seems he's a repeat offender in that respect.

Don't get me wrong, though, I'm absolutely addicted to this story. I do hope James does something to redeem himself soon! (And I am sort of hoping for some Jenny/Luke/Dom drama - does that make me horrible?)

Author's Response: HI! Thank you so much! Ohhh yes James' dream is in high demand, and I'm almost hesitant to say I don't think it'll ever make an appearance in a full way in the story (hesitant because I know it won't, lol) but I wonder if maybe there's another way I could put it somewhere to show you guys, hmm :/ ...

Jenny and Luke!!! I think they're going to be QUITE interesting hahaha.

I KNOW!? What is he doing?! And you're absolutely right -- James is aware on some level that she's playing ignorance too well to be winding him up and confusing him, but he still has his own thoughts and evidence that further drives him up the wall and it's just ... too much. But you're right, I think Jen feels the EXACT same way, despite it all. You just do not treat someone you care about that way.

I think it's so insane that I'm actually glad you don't want them to be together right now? LOL. That has to be the first time an author has said that hahahahah. But it just makes me think you're feeling and seeing EXACTLY what Jenny is and that just makes her decisions more understandable. So, well chuffed haha.

God, he does seem to be a repeat offender, doesn't he?

Omg that's the first time I think someone's said they're addicted to my fic?!!??! So happy??? And *wink* I think James will ... eventually .

And no, I LIVE for drama, specifically concerning Jenny, Luke and Dom hahaha

Thank you for this lovely review!!! I hope to see your thoughts on the next two chapters! They kind of accelerate things hahah. Thank you!! xxx

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