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Review:Glisten says:
This story is an interesting read because there is a very strong sense of voice to it, almost as if Nic is writing it herself.

She seems to be leaving a pretty solid friend group. Although, it's possible they could visit her by apparation if any of them are old enough, right? I assume there's going to be stuff sbout them later in the story since this chapter was dedicated to them.

Its interesting how you made Ilvermorny kids have phones. In my opinion it's pretty reasonable that they would have them especially since, even though they're magical, they're emerged in No-Maj culture. The only problem I could see with that is taking a picture or video of something magical happening. The owners of No-Maj phone companies would be able to see and then the magical world would be screwed.

It's nice that you have a few chapters queued up to release! I always find myself becoming a little impatient when someone releases a chapter or two of their story and then takes like two months to release the next.

Have you thought of getting a banner on your story yet? You've got a pretty good description and I think if you had some images to catch reader's eyes this story could do pretty well!

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you for your lovely reviews! I really appreciate your thoughts on this!

I do want to bring Nic's solid friends into future chapters, as it would be really interesting to see how certain characters react to her new friends at Hogwarts.

The main character and her current friends are loosely based around my life (but who's isn't?) since I didn't know where to start, and I figured who knows me better than me? It may actually be kinda lame haha.

I've kind of mention this in the next chapter, but there's a magical extension on phones for wizards. I thought it would be a fun addition since it is the 21st century after all. Ilvermorny in my head is more lenient towards these things. Videos/photos with magic or anything that could expose the wizard community is run by magic companies that oversee everything.

And yes, I've just actually joined The Dark Arts and put in a banner request! I hope to get that up somewhat soon!

Thanks again for your reviews, as it really makes me feel like I can do something as write.


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