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Review:op tree says:
Firstly can I say this is one of my favourite stories - it has the right amount of comedy, romance and action. This chapter was absolutely hilarious! I can't believe Charlie has to put up with James for the holidays - not that I'm complaining because the two of them together are extremely amusing. Also, I wanted to ask was this the first time James actually called Charlie by her first name instead of Simmons?

Additionally I loved the part where Charlie confronted James on his smirk; it was well written and long-awaited as that smirk really gets on her nerves. I really want to know what would've happened between them if the bench hadn't moved back and Teddy hadn't appeared (great timing though).

Overall it was a great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Christmas holidays with all the 5th year Gryffindors will definitely not be calm or rational! Please update ASAP!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It was the first time James has called her Charlie (albeit mostly out of exasperation; I figure sometimes those two are so ridiculous they forget to hate each other), so good catch! :)

Haha The whole bench thing was pretty conveniently timed, but also just evil enough ;) Also, yeah, there's no way the Christmas holidays are going to be anything close to normal. :)

Thanks so much for the awesome feedback, and (I hope) I'll have the next chapter up soon! :)

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