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Review:putitonpaper says:
I'm still enjoying this. Your chapters seem short but I don't mind that as I'm pretty sure my chapters were also short when I started Uncharted. I like how the flashbacks show us how close Al and Belle were. It's not just that she lost her boyfriend's brother - she lost a friend. I think James's reaction to Dom's speech is very, very believable. He just lost his brother and she's kinda attacking him. And then again, I totally understand Dom sticking up for her best friend who's clearly hurting. I've never felt such an urge to be on EVERYONE'S side. lol.

Author's Response: Yes, I loved adding Dom in. In my world, Dom is very loyal to her friends and family. So while James is family, Belle is basically her family too. So she wants to be nice and understanding with James but she like always doesn't want him to act like a little prat to Belle

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