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Review:putitonpaper says:
Ah, you've done a really good job constructing your chapters in my opinion. The thing about starting a story with a big event is that the audience is not yet attached/in love with your characters yet, you know? But I'm somehow already feeling for, attached to Belle. And the flashbacks are so well done that I can clearly see how Belle was/is a part of the Potter family and how much James invited her into his family without holding back because he loves/loved her so much.

Author's Response: I love the flashbacks. I like the idea of giving a character and then add more and more to her

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