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Review:Rachel says:
I really love how things are going with both James. Its nice to see the 70s one tell her that Sirius had a tough time with breaking up with her and I like how the Next-Gen one is being so cool.

Author's Response: Ahh thank you for another speedy review - I love hearing what you think! I'm glad you like how the James' are being portrayed - I get worried that I'm not distinguishing between the two properly, and I get almost as confused as Marissa about which I'm writing about at times. I had to edit the part where James/Grandfather Potter tells Marissa about how Sirius had such a tough time so much, as it felt a bit out of character, but it was important for Marissa to hear. I hadn't originally planned for Next-Gen James to be such a big character in the story but I got a little carried away and I've had to rehash the whole story plan to accommodate him, I love having him playing a larger part. :)

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