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Review:Hasane says:
this chapter was very well handled. it's hard to write a panic attack in the third person (for me at least) because you don't have the full scope of the person's emotions.

i love how lily comes to Hugo's aid when it's clear he's troubled. and that last scene with lily and lorcan, that was a moment of vulnerability for lily. was it lorcan's presence that allowed her to freely cry, or was it a matter of time and place?

Author's Response: Thank you! I worry about misrepresenting aspects of the mental health concerns addressed in this story so it's always a relief to hear people thinking they've been dealt with correctly.

More on Lily and Lorcan later :)


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