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Review:Hasane says:
i was right! there's no better feeling knowing you've predicted something correctly. but it's also kind of sad that i was right, i mean, someone's dead.

you've portrayed mei's shock (and maybe despair?) very well.

and i've got a better picture of lily now. she selective about the people she choose to trust, and of course hugo would be the first.

lily and hugo as a duo seem to be a staple in people's next gen story, but the relationship here seems to be different. not in a romantic sense, but just... different. i'm not sure how to explain it.

Author's Response: Well done! I love hearing people's predictions :)

I'm glad you thought Mei was convincing, and I think you've got a pretty good understanding of Lily's values.

Thanks for reviewing!

Emma x


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