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Review:sushmita says:
Typo "lost and ear"

This is a great start to the story - the wedding scene. I just find it a lil bit odd thet Ginny brought Bellatrix down. Bellatrix is one of the most powerful witches around. Ginny getting so many death eaters just seems really unimaginable but then I guess they're not expecting an underage witch to be dueling them either. But able to fight off Bellatrix definitely isn't believable.

Author's Response: Hi there - thanks for the readthrough! I will be responding to all of your reviews momentarily. Glad you like the story. Your reviews have gotten be back into writing it!

Re: Ginny getting so many death eaters - I've revised this chapter slightly so she isn't crazy strong right off the bat. However, the point of this story is that Ginny becomes crazy strong in her own right, so I don't think I'd say that it's not believable that she would get in a few lucky shots with Bellatrix. Nonetheless, I appreciate your point. Perhaps, as a reader, it's more believable to watch Ginny's power grow as she moves through this story.

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