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Review:mcdash says:
I really loved this chapter, even with no James in it. It was a bit of reprieve from the procedural aspect of this fic-- which I love, don't get me wrong, but I like seeing Alice's developing relationships. Emma's such a fun character, and even though she might be a little overbearing, I love her!

I thought the bit about the toilets was funny. In canon, were they actually required by the Ministry to use during the War? I admit that my HP knowledge is a little shoddy as of late, but I've been planning a re-read of the series for some time (I've begun the Philosopher's Stone so many times I might have the first chapter memorized word-for-word at this point).

Emma leaving the bar with Alice was really sweet in my opinion. I know many occasions where I've been abandoned (or done the abandoning) so I loved that Emma stayed with her rather than letting her go home by herself. Emma gives off very sincere friendship vibes and I'm all for it. I just love female friendships with my whole heart.

And yes!! The admission that she thinks James is fit!! These are always my favorite parts of fics; like yes, today you think he's just attractive, but tomorrow you're halfway in love with him, and I'm so down with it.

I'm really enjoying this story so far and can't wait to see where you go with these characters! :)

Author's Response: Hi mcdash!

I'm so happy you liked this chapter! I was a bit worried people wouldn't find it interesting, since there wasn't much James in it. And I love Emma too--she's great!

Haha, I'm glad you liked the toilet bit. Honestly, my memory could never be so amazing as to remember such a tiny detail, so I actually looked it up online! And apparently, yes, it was required to use the toilets during the War. (I also definitely think you should re-read the series! Though I know it can be hard, since the more exciting stuff happens later on.)

Yes, I'm so happy you're liking Emma and the girls' friendship! Woo! I think female friendships are great, too.

Hahah exactly! I also love the build up in fanfiction!

Thank you so much for reviewing and I will update as soon as I can,

Sofia xxx

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