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Review:DossyVilja says:
Hi :) Here from ff.net blue vs bronze

I was very much intrigued by this story, and I love that you decided to write about Marlene McKinnon, although I could not figure out who's POV it was until you said it at the end. That might have been your intention, but it kept me confused throughout the whole story.

The descriptive language you use is beautiful, although a little bit too complex to me (several times I had to re-read a sentence to make some sense out of it - but native English readers might not have that problem ;)).

Also introducing that Marlene knows about what Regulus was really doing is an idea I liked.

Overall you have so much subtle thing in so few words, I was truly impressed by the story - even if I'm not sure I fully understand it after the second read either :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! My writing style is very choppy, especially in this one-shot, so I completely understand why it was difficult to understand! I'm sorry to hear that but am happy to hear that you enjoyed the rest. I am so interested in Regulus as a character, so I couldn't resist sneaking him in there.

Thank you for your review!
blackballet


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