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Review:Laura says:
Hi. I really like how your story is progressing.
I love Alice so much, she is so relatable. I feel sympathetic towards her social anxiety. Some people just do not like crowds and like to be alone with their own thoughts. That is fine with me.
And of course Emma, she is so great and such an nice contracts to Alice. I agree with her on the ‘James topic’, he is totally trying to chat her up. But I guess people like Alice do not notice stuff like that, well at least not on conscious level (by the way, I love your reference to Freud). But he did try to talk to her at the party as well, which indicates some kind of interest. It did end up in Alice’s unfortunate comment though. Am I correct in seeing references to his grandfather behaviour?
I am enjoying your story immensely. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Hi!

Thanks so much for leaving a review :)

I'm really glad you like/sympathize with Alice and think that she's relatable! As a writer, that is of course one of my goals.

I love Emma too, her witty comebacks are great haha! Time will tell for James' thoughts regarding Alice (though you are right about the party). However, Emma also enjoys making Alice uncomfortable (in a friendly way), so there is that to consider, too.

And yes, I would say James Potter II is similar to his grandfather (obviously in the way they both run their hands through their hair).

Thanks so much for reviewing once again and stay tuned for more!!

Sofia


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